God, Is This The World You Have Created? Comments

I love it. So much for the worlds lost innocence. Why do we do this? Why do we pretend? I find this poem very breathtaking and I understand that feeling, those thoughts. // Love J.J

Wow, dark but good. The final verse in particular is very striking.

Thats the reason mankind must start afresh in another plant somehow Mars Thought provoking write.

Dear Nader, first of all I would like to apologize to say that is not correct to say the world is full of....The ratio should be considered...Indeed, the more we love, the more will see the beauty... God loves his creatures and we should too.

Sorry that I have to tell your mistakes. Take it as a friend's help. Full of women who have lost... Now, my idea. Nader, this poem is fantastic. Very great. The same way that I think. Great.

Sorry that I have to tell your mistakes. Take it as a friend's help. Full of women who have lost... Now, my idea. Nader, this poem is fantastic. Very great. The same way that I think. Great.

again good work love the meaning, there's nightmare in our reality, at times it seems beautiful only exist in broken wishes dream

Full of nice meaning that people should concern about them. we have to wake up from our dream and see the world, this poem is perfect. well done.