He makes us cry,
He makes us smile,
But pain surrounds all the while.
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dear, as you wished I am commenting. god should not be measured through the scale of our fulfilled wishes. For me god is the name of good intentions.All the problems around are to be attributed to the HUMAN himself, as Kara Towe puts it- human is the only creature who has given FREE WILL.As far as your poem is concerned- it's body is very good.You can go far with the carrier, Good Luck.
Since you requested my reading of your poem, and asked me to leave a comment here it is; Well, certainly a lot of anger. The world is what it is because of it, God had nothing to do with that, it's humans having been allowed free will. So the next time you feel like lashing out, try thinking about your own anger, and how the rest of the world follows that. The mirror has two faces, The Man In The Mirror by Michael Jackson really expresses my point of view. Good write, hopefully next time you can put it to better use.
There are interesting directions of thinking here, God depicted as an idol sitting on a wheel of fortune steering God knows where. Both descriptions are out of my scope of belief, I believe evil is the outcome of human free will, but I think I understand the underlying questions in this poem, If God is good why does evil happen or why does God allow evil to happen, have been asking the same question many times, I think it is because God is not an idol who manipulates human free will. I can understand your pain and anger. It's a tough one, leads to lots of atheism. However, atheism has not resolved the issue either. Your free will will find the answer that best suits your choice. Wish you all the best on whatever track of thinking you pick up. Thank you for inviting me to read this.