God In You Poem by Reshma Ramesh

God In You

Rating: 3.6


As you sleep
and you turn around
wrap your
tiny arms around
my neck
your tiny breath
on my cheek
I look up at the
stars
I made for you
on the roof
hoping they will
protect you
and I
thank God for coming
to me
in every bit of you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tapas Baidya 22 September 2008

A very simple idea has been expressed with high poetic talent. Fantastic. Thanks. Tapas Baidya, Kolkata, India.

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Hades Pandemonium 19 September 2008

A poem filled with goodness and light.

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Raj Nandy 19 September 2008

I too belive that there is a spark of the Divine in us all! And as the poet Wordsworth had said, this remains more pronounced in little children - the child of God! -Raj Nandy

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Caterpillar MC 15 September 2008

In a single word, just beautiful....

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Rajaram Ramachandran 13 September 2008

It is not that much easy to find God in everybody, but you have found it thro' this short verse.

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Aiswarya. T.anish 08 October 2008

God is everywhere. Great poem. Best wishes! Aishu

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Dr Kamran Haider 04 October 2008

Simple, pure and beautiful...

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Dr. Ram Sharma 02 October 2008

the poem contains simplicity

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Sadiqullah Khan 23 September 2008

yes the tiny hands, , so loving and innocent, , , , , ,10

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Ivor Hogg 23 September 2008

Beautiful in its simplicity

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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