Friday, October 13, 2017

God In The Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the sun is up and no one looks in the sky
At night we see the stars and our souls take flight
I found a reason why no stars for the sun
It burns, won't understand the language of fun
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Yewande Adedokun
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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2017

When the sun is up and no one looks in the sky at night we see the stars and our souls take flight. At deep night in deep silence we feel God's wonderful creation. We see God among stars with brilliant perception. This is brilliantly penned excellent poem. ..10

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 October 2017

I find God in the stars I look on as my hope lingers I take solace in the stars....final sentence... I will be a god in the stars.. i smiled when i reaad it. thank u dear poet. liked ur poem very much. you are gifted with imagination.. thank u.

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Yewande Adedokun

Yewande Adedokun

owo, ondo state
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