Saturday, March 22, 2014

God In The Box Comments

Rating: 4.0

The only problem is, we don't know.
Everything else can be determined.
Good things in life = good god.
Bad things = bad god.
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Nathan Coppedge
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Akhtar Jawad 10 March 2019

And that box is a human heart, it's not madness, it's a philosophic thought that the poet has painted in an unique color.

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Prabir Gayen 02 January 2019

Fine poem with fine diction........../////

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Adeline Foster 01 July 2016

Good thoughts. Read mine __ If There Be No God __ Adeline

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Godfrey Morris 02 June 2015

May not agree with some things written but a good poem nevertheless

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Nathan Coppedge 12 October 2014

Thanks for your comment, Chris Howie. I like to think it's a good poem, but I've had some critical moments where I thought it was too casual, or I didn't know enough about what I meant by the poem. I think it has a good effect, though.

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Chris Howie 11 October 2014

Solid stuff, though I can't say I quite get the meaning. It's one of those poems that is pleasing to read, just from how it is written, and sometimes that is enough.

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Chuy Amante 28 May 2014

Why can't god think outside the box if he got out might be eaten by a fox

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Nathan Coppedge 24 April 2014

Re: Uriah Hamilton: That sounds like a fashionable thing to say. Are you saying God is an alien?

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Uriah Hamilton 24 April 2014

Making god in our image.

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