Tuesday, October 13, 2015

God Helps Comments

Rating: 5.0

She was stranded on the green belt,
between two busy roads,
carrying the consequence of love,
in the busy morning hours,
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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2015

God is Great....Liked your poem.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 October 2015

Verily, a good description of what happened, A female really faces a lot but God above has His hand on all.....10

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Valsa George 14 October 2015

Yes, God intervenes in times of difficulty. To get stranded somewhere, though not quite grave, is still so tiresome. Quite interesting to read about the role of grandparents in taking the grand children to school which both the groups enjoy despite the hardships!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2015

pleasure is shared by both, but pain is only for female, ..........of course, it happens. An amusing poem that reveals the true events happened on road nicely penned......10

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Kelly Kurt 13 October 2015

I enjoy writing and reading about the daily occurrences in life. Especially when they are penned as artfully as this. Thanks for sharing, Akhtar

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Khalid Saifullah 13 October 2015

A wonderful write.............................................

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