Tuesday, March 15, 2016

God Help Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

God help me I have no hope
I sought blessings from the pope
It did not work
I was addicted to heroin and dope
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Ayman Parray
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M Asim Nehal 15 March 2016

Very interesting write, I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.....10++++++++

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Nosheen Irfan 15 March 2016

A mature piece of writing dealing with the battle between good n evil in man. The forces of evil are overpowering n hence the soul is lost n broken. Love the rhyme n the diction.

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Ayman Parray 15 March 2016

Thanks my friend, Nosheen.

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