Monday, April 7, 2008

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Few days ago
Bees came
Sat down on a tree
ONe corner of our town
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Abdul Razaq
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Abdul Ghaffar 09 September 2014

This poem is very touching heart. I am very glad to know that you have such ideas and thoughts about these creatures in your feelings, heat and passions. I have no words in your praise because you are nice and good person in this world. Thanks a lot Dear

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Chitra - 03 April 2010

home sweet home...is where one is the safest, is the haven where one finds solace. a kind-hearted poem

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Ershad Mazumder 29 September 2008

Theme is very good.But it has become a narrative short story.I appreciate your feeling.

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Katherine Wiley 13 April 2008

A very touching poem. I am glad you have fondness for the little creatures in your heart. kat

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Abdul Razaq

Abdul Razaq

faisalabad, pakistan
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