God, Give Me Back My… Comments

Thanks Sandra for your excellent critiquing in a string of my recent poems.Your comments are very true, well-said and genuine too. with great regards Dr John Celes

Yes, of course Michael. But this is just a wish and the poet pines for some lost assets of life. Thank you for the comment anyway. with regards,

The true poet must always be willing to give himself away in words. You felt this one deeply and it shows. An excellent creative effort. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler

You probably can't have all of that - but the last stanza sounds eminently do-able!

in the end there can be only peace the heart always close to home and the final shelter of love a fine poem