Thursday, December 7, 2006

God Forgive Me From The Sin Comments

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as i stand under the rain
asking god to forgive me from the sin
asking god with an eye full of tears
please god forgive today
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aliyah aliyah
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Gaurav Silwal 07 December 2006

A very nice and wonderful poem....Keep writing.....Gaurav

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Raghavan Warrier 07 December 2006

Very good poem. But you need to be careful about the spelling and punctuation. But the poem is an excellent one.

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