Sunday, December 17, 2006

God Exacts Revenge Comments

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After Adam had choked on the apple eve had gifted him
and was torn into the nightmares God had blessed him with,
God struck the sky like a drum.
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Thomas Rickarby
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Anna Russell 17 December 2006

The title of this gives a real punch to that last line. A potent, strong and well written poem. Hugs Anna xxx

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That hits to the root. It is finely penned. t x

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