Saturday, November 1, 2008

God Dreams....... Comments

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In His mighty sleep,
yet staying awake,
God waves his wand,
with stars that spring,
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nithya raghavan
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Indira Renganathan 02 December 2008

You have a great skill of imagery...keep writing to get refined more....10

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Ershad Mazumder 15 November 2008

Yes, its really a poem. I like your theme and style. But read it again and again for reediting. Try to feel where lies the unnecessary words.

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