We take birth, die and take birth and play,
Many do not understand but still they say.
There is rebirth is true which we do feel,
While we think of this universe heads rill.
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2) and sure we stay with Father in mind, no doubt, we stay with Father in mind absolutely. Thank you so much for sharing this superb devotional. A 10 Topscore and much much more. Dashingly rendered, you have my appreciations and respect dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. God be with you and your great family always
This excellent poem is true amazing, true impressing, true magnificent and very touching our heart and soul. I have read many times again and I have enjoyed every single word that is shared here. God’s Wonders still occur
It's really wonder thing. This poem is based on such theme. This excellent poem is true amazing, true impressing, true magnificent and very touching our heart and soul. I have read many times again and I have enjoyed every single word that is shared here. God’s Wonders still occurr and sure we stay with Father in mind, no doubt, we stay with Father in mind absolutely. Thank you so much for sharing this superb devotional. A 10 Topscore and much much more. To MyPoemList.
He is very much kind, our beloved one He keeps our life thread in His hand. In this Earth following birth and death we always remain in dandle. Who can go up to its depth and who can understand this miracle?
God remembers us He comes to teach. God gives his love affection God dandles us. Father keeps us in his lap He does fondle from which we get pleasure. Let us stay with Father in mind
It was a big pleasure! 10++++++++++++ Przemyslaw Musialowski
Thank you so much for this beautiful and philosophical poem. There is always a debate between various philosophers about birth, life, death and rebirth. But one thing is certain. There is a GOD. For God all beings are of equal importance. Mystical and miraculous are God's ways! 100+++
(continued) .. chive? a plant? // careful how you use fondle as one definition involves! : stroke or caress lovingly or erotically. Your desire to rhyme sometimes may cause the poem to be less than it could be [ i think ]. in rare cases i give up trying to rhyme two lines and don't. imagine/machine is a very good 'sight rhyme', but not such a good 'sound rhyme'. Indeed: Who can understand this miracle that can go to depth? .........to MyPoemList bri ;)
some favorite lines: There is wonder everywhere we see, Wonder every insect is wonder also bee. Even some are smaller we do not imagine, Under microscope we observe by machine...................(to continue) ..
i 'had to' look up dandles.: (Googled) 1- move (a baby or young child) up and down in a playful or affectionate way. synonyms: bounce, jiggle, dance, rock //// in line #4 i think you want the verb form of reel **, (definition #2) , not rill (which i was unfamiliar with) (a flow of water, as a stream) : REEL: 1- wind a line onto a reel by turning the reel. 2.- lose one's balance and stagger or lurch violently. (to continue) ...
A nice penning about creation of this universe with all wonders and surprises. We can find a fine balancing and reasoning amongst all the creations what are found in this universe. Very nice observation about this wholesome creation. Thanks for sharing.
From a speck of dust on a planet all of us exist in this vast Universe, God has created a multitude of differences. Some appreciate and remain grateful. Others choose to destruct and remain hateful. But all, which is given life, DANGLES as it is wished by 'that' which has created our existence. Thank you, Kumarmani. Very Nice.
God is our father of heaven. He is our grandfather too. God has greater role to nourish us through power of nature and he guides us. He listens to all of our prayers. We should trust him. Of course he dandles us through his affectionate arms. This poem is heart touching.