God Dandles Us Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
God Dandles Us
We take birth, die and take birth and play,
Many do not understand but still they say.
There is rebirth is true which we do feel,
While we think of this universe heads rill.
There is wonder everywhere we see,
Wonder every insect is wonder also bee.
Even some are smaller we do not imagine,
Under microscope we observe by machine.
We do not able to define smallest or largest,
Nobody can say which is bigger or biggest.
Billions of souls wear bodies as dress of soil,
Bodies do not match each other at all and spoil.
We wander and adopt many ways to live,
Some become ruler, some bagger in chive.
It's strange that we forget ourselves and miss,
We try to see wind while blows and do hiss.
While God remembers us and come to teach,
At that time we try to get back quality of each.
God gives affection and love and does dandle.
We get pleasure as father keeps in lap and fondle.
Come on oh people let us stay with father in mind,
He is our beloved one, keeps our thread and kind.
We remain in dandle in this Earth by birth and death,
Who can understand this miracle that can go to depth?
Thank you so much for this beautiful and philosophical poem. There is always a debate between various philosophers about birth, life, death and rebirth. But one thing is certain. There is a GOD. For God all beings are of equal importance. Mystical and miraculous are God's ways! 100+++
(continued) .. chive? a plant? // careful how you use fondle as one definition involves! : stroke or caress lovingly or erotically. Your desire to rhyme sometimes may cause the poem to be less than it could be [ i think ]. in rare cases i give up trying to rhyme two lines and don't. imagine/machine is a very good 'sight rhyme', but not such a good 'sound rhyme'. Indeed: Who can understand this miracle that can go to depth? .........to MyPoemList bri ;)
some favorite lines: There is wonder everywhere we see, Wonder every insect is wonder also bee. Even some are smaller we do not imagine, Under microscope we observe by machine...................(to continue) ..
i 'had to' look up dandles.: (Googled) 1- move (a baby or young child) up and down in a playful or affectionate way. synonyms: bounce, jiggle, dance, rock //// in line #4 i think you want the verb form of reel **, (definition #2) , not rill (which i was unfamiliar with) (a flow of water, as a stream) : REEL: 1- wind a line onto a reel by turning the reel. 2.- lose one's balance and stagger or lurch violently. (to continue) ...
God is our father of heaven. He is our grandfather too. God has greater role to nourish us through power of nature and he guides us. He listens to all of our prayers. We should trust him. Of course he dandles us through his affectionate arms. This poem is heart touching.
2) and sure we stay with Father in mind, no doubt, we stay with Father in mind absolutely. Thank you so much for sharing this superb devotional. A 10 Topscore and much much more. Dashingly rendered, you have my appreciations and respect dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. God be with you and your great family always
This excellent poem is true amazing, true impressing, true magnificent and very touching our heart and soul. I have read many times again and I have enjoyed every single word that is shared here. God’s Wonders still occur
It's really wonder thing. This poem is based on such theme. This excellent poem is true amazing, true impressing, true magnificent and very touching our heart and soul. I have read many times again and I have enjoyed every single word that is shared here. God’s Wonders still occurr and sure we stay with Father in mind, no doubt, we stay with Father in mind absolutely. Thank you so much for sharing this superb devotional. A 10 Topscore and much much more. To MyPoemList.
He is very much kind, our beloved one He keeps our life thread in His hand. In this Earth following birth and death we always remain in dandle. Who can go up to its depth and who can understand this miracle?
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11/19/2025 10:11:08 AM # 1.0.0
It was a big pleasure! 10++++++++++++ Przemyslaw Musialowski