God Children Comments

A good read, nice poem! Well done, Satheesan!

I don't believe I have ever heard or read a description of a child put this way. That is very creative by the writer and very interesting for the reader. I can certainly recomment this. I did not vote on this. I could not decide. GW62

Sat Thee Are Santi.. Santiswarupa!

a beautifully penned wonder, it emancipates soul from body, great mind’s great relationship with God understandably described, happy and pleasant feeling this poem generates, a very good write and thank you for sharing Rema

In the cradle of my soft thoughts, I swing you on, making you sleep. by singing a lullaby, I enter, in your dream watching you, then wake you up into my dream, stretching my hands to hold you. in these lines satheesan tells us how lovingly he holds God in his mind! a lullaby to Him who makes this universe sleep dream and swing back to life each day... good write sateesan! why not a ten!