Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, April 14, 2009

God, Bless Only Those Comments

Rating: 4.9

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Durga Sethani 18 November 2009

pray to God, to shower bless, Not on those who commit sin less

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Sangita Rao 13 October 2009

I pray to God, to shower bless, Not on those who commit sin less

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Severina Dsouza 17 September 2009

pray to God, to shower bless, Not on those who commit sin less But are most wanted and dreaded, ,

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Ketan Rajgor 11 September 2009

I pray to God, to shower bless, Not on those who commit sin less But are most wanted and dreaded, ................10

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Darshna Chopra 04 September 2009

the sweetness that has been mine is as sweet as it was naughty I am me, ..can’t be the best but the worst i'll be........10

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Ashley Paul 29 August 2009

I pray to God, to shower bless, Not on those who commit sin less

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Kashi Paul 24 August 2009

Long live mafias who plunder and loot, Kill innocents and kick with heavy boot, People get scared with noise of their foot, ....10

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Umesh Lalvani 24 August 2009

I pray to God, to shower bless, Not on those who commit sin less .......10

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Lady Grace 20 August 2009

'I may have option not to have faith, Cry not for fate but prefer descent death, They will have pleasure and very good passage, Consider it bless and very good message, '...smart words from a brillian poet..

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Poonam Suthar 19 August 2009

it is very good poem and eduative....10

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Indani Narayan 15 August 2009

poem with diffferent meaning...10

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Lalvani Rekha 12 August 2009

poem is in satiare form...10

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Pami Panchal 12 August 2009

very sarcastical poem...10

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Jigisha Vyas 08 August 2009

very very funny aspect in it....10

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Raju Rajput 08 August 2009

real good art piece....10

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Sulochna Pandit 08 August 2009

very nice piece of writing....10

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Maulin Shah 07 August 2009

very good oem n interesting....10

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Kunwar Patel 07 August 2009

very good poemindeed...10

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Suwarna Patil 06 August 2009

it is sarcastical poem....10

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Kamli Kamal 06 August 2009

it is God's displeasure...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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