Wednesday, November 9, 2011

God Bless Not Only America Comments

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(To enjoy the song for this poem, please see the poet's profile for the website.)


God bless the hungry, in Columbia or in Cambodia, in Europe or in Ethiopia.
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Gordon Tseng
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Atsiylah Garfinkel 09 October 2012

This is a good piece, and worthy of praise. I would like to see this fleshed out more as I think it has the potential to be the foundation of a ballad. Nicely done, or begun as you decide.

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Soulful Heart 30 November 2011

u have really hit the core................but frankly they may have been blessed with material richness but they r paupers in the humane ground and r literally orphans emotionally...........so we must really pity them.............

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 November 2011

Gordon u made laugh here my man, , ha ha ha! ! ! i love it, , , yes God must bless us all not only america, , , ,

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