God At The Bus Stop Comments

My dear Uriah, this is exceptional. Great atmosphere, and beautiful, profound imagery that cannot fail to touch the souls of your readers. My applause. Always your friend, Sandra

love representation of the city

rain, dark bars, loneliness- you build the mood and then the final lines... so touching; God at the bus stop thanks Mamta

I can just picture you walking through the night surrounded with these thoughts dear Uriah. The image of the 'dark bars' and parking lots in the second verse would make anyone feel as intensely as you describe. Fine penning from a poet at the height of his powers.

Guess we all have our ticket - Heaven or Hell

This is excellent. EVERYTHING IS POETRY!