Saturday, October 15, 2005

God And The World Comments

Rating: 3.0

God is a traffic cop
conducting a mad symphony
in the busiest intersection,
wildly tooting his whistle
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Max Reif
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Maggie Flanagan-Wilkie 15 October 2005

This was good. Some great imagery happening.

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Poetry Hound 15 October 2005

Never heard that comparison before, but why not? It's as good as any, and more interesting and amusing than most. I imagine him trying to listen and respond to all the prayers flying his way. Traffic cop is a good analogy. Maybe juggler, too.

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Simone Inez Harriman 15 October 2005

Love it Max. Very clever. I had a giggle at the image.

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