Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Thursday, September 27, 2012

God And The Universe Comments

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God has got less mass than he actually requires
That's why He has hunger but has no food
That's why He feels lonely but has no spouse
That's why He fasts forever and ever
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Asif Andalib
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Adalynn Brock 01 October 2012

This poem is very beautiful, with a very strong meaning that can be strung up to carry not only the obvious but the metaphorical. Congratulations, a poem that competes with classics. Simple but deep... we as people need more of that.

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Thomas Hsi 29 September 2012

A short but descriptive poem about the nature of God, the universe, and the condition of man. Powerful little poem!

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Joe Johnson 28 September 2012

Very nice you r a good poet. It's every meaning full

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Heather Wilkins 28 September 2012

your writing is excellent. I am not so sure about the subject.

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Nader Baheri 28 September 2012

short so but so meaningful.hope God bless all of us for these harsh realities of life. mercy bocu for sharing

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M.j. Henderson 28 September 2012

Very deep and meaningful. i enjoyed this short but impresive peom.

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Ency Bearis 27 September 2012

thought provoking and interesting poem

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Sharon Vincent 27 September 2012

Short and sharp... It's good.

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Melody Thaila Kuku 27 September 2012

Intresting, i've never thought of it that way. :)

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Tanja Bulovic 27 September 2012

Very deep, I enjoyed reading this.

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Payal Parande 27 September 2012

so true a brilliant write indeed, thank you for sharing sir love payal

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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