God And Rod Poem by Lily YANG

God And Rod

Rating: 3.5


When I love you,
You are my god.
When I hate you,
You are my rod.

Friday, December 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: god,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
love poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wayne Kingston 15 March 2016

All or nothing leads to losing yourself. Surely you're worth more than that. Poetic devices often convey half truths. I really like the snapshot insight to the extremes of love. Well conceived, Lily, thank you for posting.: -)

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Manonton Dalan 26 December 2015

simplicity is virtue

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