Alas! There’s no one better than God
And He is cruel somewhat
God feels lonely
Although He has so many friends
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Thanks for the invite, Your view of God is not the same view i have but i found your poem very interesting.
When it comes to the discussion of God I believe we are all entitled to our own opinion. Many believers have their own interpetation about God...as myself I like to see God more as a spirit who is able to dwell with in us to do the right things rather than a person set out into man kind....thank you for writing this poem because I think it has really opened up the gap to what believers think.
Man arafa nfsa faqad arafa rabba. If you know yourself, you know your lord.- Prophet Mohammad(S) Know thyself- Socretes. Humanbeing is the whole creation- Devilpoet
That's a great way to picture what God might think, feel, hope, and other humanly expressions that she might also feel.. Great poem..
Thanks, Asif.Your poem about God is a nice one; keep writng
I personally believe you poems are good and there is nothing unclear! I also personally believe everybody have the right to see things in their way. In the end most of us believe in something and religion it should take us all in one direction, and again in my point of view I don't see anything wrong in your poems. Just keep writing and express yourself but also it is good for you to get lots of review about your poems no matter negative or positive and you always will get comments as religion in our daily bread. take care
I found that very insightful on how you view god. The words balance the structure with such finesse, and i can say i sort of understand what you mean. I am not that clever but i can see that you have talent. Keep writing
I think It's a great insight into your mind on how you view God
Hi Asif, I have gone through some of your poems. The abstractness of your poems has really stirred my heart & I really feel sorrow when such talents like you are exisiting in Bangladesh but world doesnt know them due to being poets of 3rd world countries.It would really be doing unjustice if I dont write these lines for you & for your poems. Shibly, Faridpur.
oh my god what i read? amazing words you r the master nice work friend
I must tell you. This is very enlightening. I enjoyed it so. I see, hear, and very well understand. You are indeed a visionary. Wow like the way you allow your third eye to see before writing. wonderfully written and thanks again for sharing this beatiful piece with me.
very unassuming and candid commentary on faith
A new thouht to all theists. As i am more an athiest, i have not much to comment. You may read my ' the concept od soul' and other phylosophical poems since you are neithe fanatic nor conservative.
Your Poem Is Wonderful? Is God A Woman? Do You Read The Bible? Do You Believe In Hell? Just Wondering Love The Poem. Thanks -Brie
Asif, Although I have known God for a few years, I find your interpretation of God as a women to be thought provoking. It's amazing that even though we both believe in God our understanding of God is on a much different scale. Do you believe that you must do good things on earth to go to heaven? Do you believe in the Devil? or Hell? I have never read the Koran but have you ever read the Bible? Your poem is wonderful, Thanks
this is the first time i come across a male who is personifying the Almighty as a female....wonderful...great going...keep writing
Yes! We can see GOD in our mother! It's a wonderful poem. l like it a lot!
Good you put your thoughts out about God everyone has him within...regards