Saturday, March 30, 2019

God And Mother Comments

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So in love you lost your singularity,
And became so beautiful in plurality,
So in love I lost my virginity,
You are God and me a mother!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Aniruddha Pathak 14 July 2019

So in love you lost your singularity, And became so beautiful in plurality, So in love I lost my virginity, You are God and me a mother! ... Lovely monologue of a mother with God. I wonder what He would have said, had it been a dialogue.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 March 2019

A wonderful poem that captures the essence of God and mother. And expresses clearly and poetically their distinctions. Beautifully crafted and well conveyed.

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