Tuesday, September 18, 2018

God And His Gifts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh! Master Musician,
Fill in in this hollow reed of thine
Melodies celestial unheard unto this day.
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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' Delay not further to cast colorful rainbows across the clouded skies of my painful heart.' A magnificent line that holds us spellbound. Top Marks as always.

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A very humbling and touching prayer. The God Almighty would be happy to answer your ardent prayer embellished with great metaphors, images and spellbinding poetic expressions.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 January 2024

A beautiful and touching prayer so humbly and lovingly expressed. Great opening stanzas with wonderful poetic expressions.

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Anjandev Roy 13 January 2021

Magnificent write....dear poet.

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Valsa George 07 May 2019

This sounds like the poems in Tagore's Gitanjali! Only when music fills, the hollow reed becomes a musical instrument! You wish to be a flute in the hands of God to produce enchanting melody! It is a great realization that only God can paint beautiful rainbows in our cloud laden skies! This supplication to fill your heart with music and light and transform you to a pearl bearing oyster is beautiful and has come from the humble heart of a devotee!

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Thank you Valsa George. We feel to be something in the hands of God

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Parameswaran Nair (DPN) 06 November 2018

Thank you Kumaramaniji. I feel the grace of God to turn a dew drop into a pearl of beauty

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2018

This poem attracts me for second visit. Really it is a marvelous poem.. God's grace is all.

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Thank you Kumaramaniji. I feel the grace of God to turn a dew drop into a pearl of beauty

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Sajin S 01 November 2018

Our prayers thee know well as he may turn our water like life into wine soon! ! ! ! .A ROUND OF APPLAUSE FOR THE POEM.

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Thank you Sajin. Hope so

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Robyn 29 September 2018

What a gorgeous poem. I like the symbolism used here.

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Thank you Robyn. Pray forme please

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2018

God is great musician and a great painter too who paints colourful rainbow of one's clouded skies of painful heart. A beautiful prayer nicely executed.10

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Thank you Kumaramaniji. We human beings are empty shells. When God decide whether to convert these shells into something worthy He put into them from his celestial stock.

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Devi Krishnakumar 20 September 2018

Beautifully crafted....

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Prabha 18 September 2018

Nice work.

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Jay Nair 18 September 2018

Short and succinct

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(DPN) 29 September 2018

Thank you. Please read me

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