God.. Comments

i love this poem its very true God is great

he was never there for me, thats why hes not in my heart

Not a bad write, Jose, despite the numerous repetitions. You got your point across to the reader very effectively, and every word you said it quite true! Carl.

I simply love it. It what God does in our life if your willing to look for him, thank you for writing this. Its made my day, ^_^

i like this! ! ! it is very very true wut our creator does.....good job 10/10

I would have preferred a stronger last line, but the structure was fine. I likethe repetition. I wish it had more internal rhythm though. Overall, very good. GW62

Awesome poem! Yep God sure is the greatest! ! You sure get a 10! ! Great work! Lisa