Monday, May 12, 2008

God Comments

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Never ending solace,
I need your stare.

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David DeSantis
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 10 July 2008

he is light of your sight, you are god! ... 10

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Xxx Xxx 15 May 2008

well, i like this, it's simple and humble, you don't try to explain anything, isn't it all about faith?

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~ Jon London ~ 12 May 2008

A truly remarkable poet, this beautifully written prayer that echo's to the soul of reader is sure sign of faith, belief and love for all that is pure. Outstanding write, My brother you never fail to amaze with your creations.10/10 Best wishes Jon.

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Onelia Avelar 12 May 2008

I do not like to say - great job as always - so the great becomes a routine. Let`s say great surprise as usually! Otherwise I agree with Floyd C and Rebel Justine. This is a sincer prayer to the 'never ending solace' - i never heard so short and universal definition of God!

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Michael Campbell 12 May 2008

i agree with the rebel 'never ending solace' it's a lifestyle for some. great job as always.

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R H 12 May 2008

'never ending solace' - that is a lovely expression of that which we seek in times of angst, sorrow, discomfort...you encapsulate in these few short lines the essence of belief, a knowing of the unknown if you like. A strong piece David. justine.

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Lynda Robson 12 May 2008

Nice piece David, I think when we are despairing we turn to God, and your poem says it all really,10 Lynda xx

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David DeSantis

David DeSantis

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