God Comments

DJ feels you were confused while writing this poem. What does thus this means: but in the mind- of Him like the silent grave. This is very absurd thinking about HIM. Check the language. May be you could not put your true feelings in it.

na thā kuchh to ḳhudā thā kuchh na hotā to ḳhudā hotā Duboyā mujh ko hone ne na hotā maiñ to kyā hotā This said it all. Beautiful poem.10++ for my fav poet Mirza Ghalib.

One will fall short of words, pen, vocabulary to shower praises for one and only, our creator and sustainer the most gracious and the most merciful the Almighty God.

Very true. He is there where he aught to be.

Good thinking... And well written with a philosophical view.,