God Comments

My restless heart set a cosy chime, To read the ecstasy the divine rhyme. O Dove! I honour your raging. beauty and a meditation on beauty takes you up into spiritual realms. thanku dear poet. very fine poetry. tony

O Dear! open the veils of your heart, Open it by pages to trace my writ. To make my pale hair go dark, In finding your smile shining to bask. beauty, senses. relishing. desires, wishes, hopes and very poetic words. thank u dear poet. tony

Well written. Stirs my senses.

Pleasing thoughts weaved with pleasant feelings

Classic verse. Well done

Excellent poem