Tuesday, February 24, 2015

God Comments

Rating: 5.0

Follow me old man,
Follow me if you can,
The black children,
The white children,
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Akhtar Jawad
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M Asim Nehal 16 October 2015

In the name of God they do heinous act....Wonderfully written poem. I liked it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 February 2015

But in the name of God, We kill our children! And we don't know, In the children we kill, Is God only God! - - - - Very aptly and deeply composed. Everywhere God is. We have to save our children who are like God.Great poem- - - 10

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Valsa George 25 February 2015

God resides within innocent hearts! When we mercilessly take away the life of young ones, in a way we are destroying the temple of God! Great write!

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Khalida Bano Ali 24 February 2015

An impressive poem....................10

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