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A heartfelt prayer.........Too good....Liked it.

Two words.. Saying all. God. And Please. A poem from the depth of your heart. It occurs as 'jawar bhata'. I felt it, because otherwise the title of the poem would not be 'God'. I think, in strong feelings you just have no other title to choose. Best wishes aapi.

A fervent cry to God to lead through the rough water of life.The fear, despite the many benevolence of God, that she might still falter; haunts the poet.A sense of submission to God pervades the whole poem.

God is giving....forgiving.... and empowering. It is just a matter of time. Lovely poem

the moments of broke the moments for pray and we are on the closest distance to god so let me say amen to gain the wisdom of god

There are moments in life when we feel lost, helpless and alone. Even when surrounded by blessings many, such negative emotions can drown us at weak moments which is only a fleeting illusion. With resilience, we can soon spring back to our happy and contented self, if we abide in His providence and mercy! Hope for the best! Hope like the gleaming taper's light Adorns and cheers our way.....Let your prayer be heard! ! An excellent write! !

God loves us guides us his blessing is always. without any of his signature nothing can move. a great poem. great write. have always faith on the grand master.

Beautiful poem Shahzia...Guide me, Bless me, forgive me..yes only God can forgive...loved reading it.

a good write ending with a lovely prayer. GOD will hear if you believe.

It is really an arresting write Shahzia Ma'am. When we feel alienated from people, family friends and their love, we collapse down and lie at the feet of God. We feel the extreme discomort of lonliness, and the strange behaviour of the known waters. But God has always another perception towards our life. A better perception. He may be wants you to discover the deep insight within you, to believe yourself, that you can move forward with your life without the help of anyone but just with His blessings. He may want you to swim through the highest tides and cut through the complexities of life, on your own. He may want you to think good about yourself, and want you to appreciate the utmost quality you possess, pure unconditional love towards all. When you no more need a constant companion, he'll then open a door and will answer you, and guide you. And that is when he will be proud about you and will become your companion. All the best! Magic Box

Nothing is irreparable as long as God is there with you! ! ! HE who has the Supreme Power can UNDO everything! ! ! your prayer has deeply affected me and is written with great emotion and feeling! ! ! A soul-stirring prayer i would say! ! ! God! guide me, bless me, forgive me God be with you always.Amen. :)))

you help me fight back the evil that tempts guide me, bless me, forgive me A plea to God that cannot be denied. Beautiful words chosen in this presentation for God. Thank you.