Tuesday, March 1, 2011

God Comments

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As I swell
He withdraws,
When I withdraw
He takes the charge.
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C. P. Sharma
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Walterrean Salley 25 June 2011

Perfectly said and powerfully said. Thanks for such valuable thoughts.10 Would you please read and comment on my poem: 'As the Sand.' Thank you.

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