Monday, July 31, 2006

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The Boundless Ocean of Brilliance
That lends the stars dazzling light
Whom obey flakes of the watery clouds,
Riding on the back of moving wind.
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Muhammad Shanazar
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Seema Chowdhury 09 September 2006

Hi its an excellent poem. Thanks for reading my poem and sending in your comments. i am very happy to know that you are from rawalpindi, i studid their for 2 years and really enjoyed my time in college. i tried to read your poem ' fall of dhaka' but coulnot find it in your poem list.good luck with your poetry.

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Joe Breunig 31 July 2006

A marvelous piece, filled with imagery and truth; great job!

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