Among the books
I was in long search.
Beyond the lines
He was only an understanding.
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Poem paints a good picture of GODS magnitude. GOD is all. Enerything is GOD. GODS intelligent spirit energy formed matter living. Never ending infinite presence in everything.
A well structured poem with a meaning content. Good write.
A touching theology that is well written!
I absolutely love the last two lines-what an epiphany! ! ! ! ! ! A ten from me very introspective poem! ! ! ! !
Yes sir, a brisk or a long walk can bring us closer to God..He is there, and yet remains a mystery...and yet so familiar....Each of us have had our personal experiences of God. Yours are so musical and charming! ! I'm loving it! ! Cheers. Subroto
A poem with searching wisdom. This was how the search for God started in ancient times. 'Poorna madam, poorna midam Poornaath, poorna mudathchyathe Poornasaya, poorna maadaya Poorne mevava shishaya the'
This is a great poem This is class Full marks Good writin Dear Poet
True, you can have His feel, you cannot realize Him through others experience or intellectual gymnasts. Wonderful exposition. Thank you for sharing it. CP
a log search, and an excellent finding of GOD in your walk and with him, your heart did talk. beautifully written! a double ten
To understand and know God, all one has to do is observe the constant wonders of nature around us. No fine clock ever devised by man is as intricate as the fabric of nature in it's daily workings, living proof that the creator of all we know set His hand to it. Your poem expresses this truth very well. Carl.
I'm not one bit religious but did enjoy your last two lines. Believe they honestly sum you belief up. Good work
this is the best poem you ever wrote.10+. excellent write and true feelings flows from your heart that can be felt in these pure words of wisdom. thanks alot for sharing. take care
This brilliant writing Ravi. Your long and ardent search brought a simple truth to your investigation. The flow of this piece is not only rhythmic, but eye opening and valuable it its powerful message. I am sure God watched you as you wrote it. Top marks! Karin Anderson
always closest to God where he resides.......on the water and in the wind....and in all nature's abundance///
and i say amen and amen..a nice write.And an uplifting one.Thanks for sharing
Good write Ravi, God is everywhere if we care to find him, 10 Lynda xx
This is a wonderful poem.