Goal Comments

set your goal and look to the sky, for it's up there flying high. great write. a ten

Someone says in his comments that others can´t be expected to have the patience to digest this poem... well, I had, I read every line of wisdom... very well written... especially the conclusion... 'You must look forward with aim so high Feet firmly on ground but looking at sky' Very impressive work! Thanks for sharing!

Life is sacred mission and should be judiciously pursued Every move will be countered and you will be sued

Cuckoo is only one with melodious voice We exclaim and appreciate without any choice

vNever thought I may have to leave and pack Did not pay serious attention or looked back When time approached, I was caught unaware Everybody should think over it and prepare

each one has his goal..to mention one, the universal goal is to have good relationship towards fellowmen...there are goals to achieve, for example, , , , , to finish studies, then get a job, then make a family then be a good parents and that is the common goal... in your piece, u express it nicely...the goal should be reached, , the goal should be achieved....ok, as a poet, its main goal is to make the reader gets the thought of the content....this piece of urs is nicely done....

inspiring....nice thoughts with very good rhyming positive ending..a positive goal thanks for sharing 10 lovelots, Maia

ooh! well written and composed. Teaching people to make hey while the sun shine

Its very...very clear in its message... each WORD every LINE every VERSE is meaningful.... I liked every bit of the poem...its so..so wonderful.... thanks a lot for uploading your poems on PH (poets like you are great inspiration) thanks a lot again

Never thought I may have to leave and pack Did not pay serious attention or looked back When time approached, I was caught unaware Everybody should think over it and prepare Not necessarily you should worry and put strain There will be enough for you to board the train You should be ready and reserve in advance All will be well and in order when you look around and glance Life journey may come to abrupt halt and adjourn, Many of your kins may leave you behind to mourn March may go ahead with sad or happy memory One should face it boldly without any worry Life is sacred mission and should be judiciously pursued Every move will be countered and you will be sued Opportunity should be availed and not missed Failure or success, death or life should always be kissed You may like or prefer to laugh at the outcome Things may turn sour when you are not welcome Hostile reception may land you in awkward position Life may look mixture of all and good composition I was surprised. I enjoyed these very much. Made me want to read more.

You can err, learn, laugh or cry No one would come and ask you why? Whether you lay flat on ground or fly You should rejoice at success and never feel shy I may not hold practical philosophical view Time and again give look back and review This will afford enough room to assess Kindness to offer and crimes to confess It may not be possible to remain lenient Not to remain calm and even silent You must look forward with aim so high Feet firmly on ground but looking at sky ------------ Just so great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Life in its simplicity and boldness, goodness and harsh....both edge tow sides on the coin...what we are is what is oath to be! ! ! Live life what is according to be............

Last two stanzas are conclusive view and is very nice to ponder over it! Though a long piece it is worth reading and is interesting as I have all kinds of experience in life! But others cannot be expected to have patience to digest it!