Monday, December 10, 2018

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Long ago
to make him shine in future
using the wolf and myths
they forced his mind
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
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Rajnish Manga 21 December 2018

Nice poem based on human psychology and human behaviour. It also explains a conditioned response. Thanks for sharing the poem. An extract: Grown up / in the cage to day / he is not afraid of them but cannot go out / of the cage / an incurable desease

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 December 2018

sometimes groaning in solitude. It an incurable desease they casted on him.. very revealing poem........ how we are conditioned in our early life. many a times we become victims of ignorance........ thank u for opening our eyes with your poem. Tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2018

Grown up in the cage to day he is not afraid of them but cannot go out of the cage......here is the essence of the poem. You have nicely composed this poem my dear friend, it is a beautiful poem indeed.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 December 2018

Ignorance! ! Unable able to see the light of the truth; Being caged. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 December 2018

You are right. To excel you are putting them into cages. Very nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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