Hit your ball as hard as you can
the poles are firm in its place
only a guard is moving around
to safe guard the place
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setting a goal in life and hitting it hard to achieve.......... a poem of determination.. thank u dear poet. tony
To safe guard the place! ! With the muse of love. Thanks for sharing.
Brief and motivational, .....That no matter the obstacle you got to achieve your objective.Thus the saying where there is a gap(will) there is away.
Good depiction of what it takes to achieve one's goal - determination, perseverance... Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Darren. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Hitting ball with proper ambition to achieve goal is definitely interesting. Hard work is key of success. Interesting message transferred....10
Yes, only hard work pays off. There is no alternative to that... Thanks for sharing..
without trying hard we cannot achieve any thing and i think it is a message for all, well-written poem
A wonderful blank verse! Thanks for sharing.....................................10/10