Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Go With The Flow Comments

Rating: 4.9

No words will wipe ur tears,
I know whts making u fear,
Had betrayed is not easy
Time will pass &u'll used to be
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Shumaila 21 November 2017

V true n full of advices n motivations nice poem :

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Merna Ibrahim 30 May 2009

A beautiful poem and full of advices to the humans......attractive title too....10++ Merna

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James Mclain 27 May 2009

the flow is upward into your life, the sand is your warm fusion, as you sit happy, content in the wisdom of a rose always in bloom, spreading scents heady brew, on the unsuspecting..iip

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a beautiful poem and read it again and liked it more than before...

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Shekhar Joshi 24 May 2009

ahh beautiful really problem comes and go lovely work

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its wonderful, , it seems to me this beautiful msg in this beautiful poem is just for me....[but actually for all]..this poem have changed my thinking..thanx..!

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Bright Rose 20 May 2009

very deep and lovely short poem, well done

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OuSs@Ma Samouna 17 May 2009

wow.... it's really the best short poem I have ever read... ++++++++++10 I'll book mark it as a favorite thanks for sharing

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Yasser Koor 16 May 2009

no words will wipe the tears, Wow wow wow i told you dear poet, , you are so hopefule girl. it is great poem. i think i should learn something from your poems someting about the hope. problem comes and goooooooooooo being lost i dark night, will give me nothing cheers Yasser

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Akram Saqib 15 May 2009

good words saying never stop thinking about a nonsense idea.good expression

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 May 2009

A poem in favor of mankind,10++

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Hazem Al Jaber 14 May 2009

yes... its a true and a facts that we face always.. so beautiful dear tara.. keep on... hazem al..

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Eyan Desir 13 May 2009

Good write good job

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wise words written beautifully Tara...

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Saadat Tahir 13 May 2009

a well written fable with good flow thanx cheers

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Shweta Advani 13 May 2009

hey...nice one...i just loved the theme coz i too live my life with this mantra...go with the flow..10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 May 2009

Very focused, compact and to the point poem. Carefully worded, beautifully expressed. An easy 10 for this one, Tara. Best Wishes Naseer

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Joseph Poewhit 13 May 2009

Finding a focus point in something is important.

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