Saturday, March 25, 2017

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Rating: 3.5

Pearl trees like golden elephants
I sigh with gallant respite
Ornate spirit in the elven wind
Circles of pleasure
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Joseph Narusiewicz
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 March 2017

Ornate spirit in the eleven wind draws memory line and imagery of Golden elephant. Stars keep power of healing. Every broken river is healed by them. Wise expression of humor in this poem strengthens imagery. Everyone pays the fountain and ridges of purple water enter in to dreamland of reality. This is an excellent poem very well crafted....10

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Joseph Narusiewicz 25 March 2017

Thanks, it's in a French Symbolist style and most idiots here do not even know what that means

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