How fast thou move with the sound, ye brook, I find;
No boat, no dive, yet, you are so beautiful, I drank,
Thy sight, a throat full opiate; I went to swoon,
A nature's painting! Lovely Curios; I will be back soon,
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Thank you! Filled with the nature's beauty, so much that came to be part of your painting. Please wave a hi to the cloud over that peak, it's part of me...
Go on painting...! ! ! You kept on painting a fine picture with the perfect lexical choice, right word at the right place made this painting...even the sounds and movements of the brook are felt...one can visualize the scene by the strong word-images! ! !
There Is always so much beauty to be found and written about in nature. Nice write Atfab.
A picturesque scene from the heights down to the plains! ! A Lovely panorama of Nature at the time of a beautiful sunset! Enjoyed! !
It seems you drank the beauty of nature.The pictorial quality is very nice.
Thanks for taking me on a memorable journey. I give you a perfect ten.
this about the unity and harmony with the mother nature so beautiful with purity of heart thanks to share Aftab
As poets we have to paint pictures with words and you have done so brilliantly with this poem.
nice to read each and every lines......really touching