Thursday, May 2, 2013

Go On Painting Comments

Rating: 4.7

How fast thou move with the sound, ye brook, I find;
No boat, no dive, yet, you are so beautiful, I drank,
Thy sight, a throat full opiate; I went to swoon,
A nature's painting! Lovely Curios; I will be back soon,
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Aftab Alam
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Shafeeqrahman Rahman 08 February 2015

nice to read each and every lines......really touching

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Heather Wilkins 02 December 2014

a beautiful painting of nature

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Elena Sandu 09 May 2013

Thank you! Filled with the nature's beauty, so much that came to be part of your painting. Please wave a hi to the cloud over that peak, it's part of me...

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Shahzia Batool 05 May 2013

Go on painting...! ! ! You kept on painting a fine picture with the perfect lexical choice, right word at the right place made this painting...even the sounds and movements of the brook are felt...one can visualize the scene by the strong word-images! ! !

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Ruby Mostazir 05 May 2013

i like your painting of nature..... : -)

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Valerie Dohren 05 May 2013

There Is always so much beauty to be found and written about in nature. Nice write Atfab.

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Valsa George 05 May 2013

A picturesque scene from the heights down to the plains! ! A Lovely panorama of Nature at the time of a beautiful sunset! Enjoyed! !

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Wahab Abdul 05 May 2013

poem on nature is always welcome...nice and fine, i enjoyed it..

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Wahab Abdul 05 May 2013

poem on nature is always welcome...nice and fine, i enjoyed it..

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Neela Nath Das 04 May 2013

It seems you drank the beauty of nature.The pictorial quality is very nice.

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Buxton Shippy 04 May 2013

Thanks for taking me on a memorable journey. I give you a perfect ten.

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Sallam Yassin 04 May 2013

this about the unity and harmony with the mother nature so beautiful with purity of heart thanks to share Aftab

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David Wood 02 May 2013

As poets we have to paint pictures with words and you have done so brilliantly with this poem.

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Aftab Alam

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