Monday, May 12, 2014

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i heard drumming, deep as a thousand thunders.
i looked up. the moon started to spin.
it spun so swiftly it threw out sparks.
they spread over the sky. some fell here.
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doug bentley
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Leah Ayliffe 02 July 2014

This is wonderful! I am very intrigued by your work. Thank you for your comment on my poem.

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Richmond, British Columbia, Canada
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