Wednesday, October 11, 2017

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Roses turned blue
As the wind blew.
Thoughts travelled miles
Amongst hidden smiles.
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Driss Ezzireg
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2017

Smell treason at the doors of reason and sorrows amaze mind. This is brilliantly expressed poem shared here on sorrows.10

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Driss Ezzireg 12 October 2017

My sincere thanks to you, Kumarmani.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 October 2017

I smell treason at the doors of reason. I must go back to where I belong. I must I go back to where I came from. The poem hovers around the deep social concern of the poet. Nicely crafted with so elegant rhyming. 10++++ for it. Subhas

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Driss Ezzireg 12 October 2017

Thanks very much, Subhas for appreciating this poem. In fact, I'm losing much of my trust in the true nature of Man.

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