Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
Wednesday, November 5, 2014

Go Away Greed Comments

Rating: 4.5

You are unseen but also captured
In minds of many you are featured,
You divert the child well nurtured,
On grazing by you animals are pastured.
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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 July 2020

4) From that point of view, PH is a true difficult poem site for many newcomers. I am glad that belongs to my past now and I regard Poem Hunter Poem Site as my own poetry home now. I do hope you'll read these responses of me. Thank you so much for all your precious comments on my poems, dear Mrs. Bhargabi. I do hope you are getting fine and healthy and that you enjoy the days with your grandkids.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 July 2020

3) Powerful theme and most beautifully worded, Mrs. Bhargabi. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family. A full 10++++++ for this fantastic poem. I must confide to you that although my poems are here since 2011, I did not know yet how to give responses here on Poem Hunter. Through much help from your spouse and eldest son, finally I could find my way here on Poem Hunter.That was in 2017-2018.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 July 2020

2) Reading this fascinating poem once again, I realize how powerful words it contains, and with excellent end rhymings. This is a very society engaged poem. You take the worst element in society just like that. Straight and direct. My hats off for you. Absolutely Greed is the worst enemy in human life. It births only negativity. Indeed it must not stay. I am sure with our prayings and God's help in our daily blessings, greed has no foot to stay anymore.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 July 2020

Could you forgive me, dear Mrs. Bhargabi Dei Mahakul? For being far too late to congratulate you with being the Member Poem Of The Day last 26 Jan 2015. Even when I responded here last 3 May 2017, I did not know that your powerful poem GO AWAY GREED was chosen by Poem Hunter an Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. Now I say to you CONGRATULATIONS, Mrs. Bhargabi. I have deep respect for the way you created this poem. It has become a magnificent and very impressing poem. (2)

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 July 2018

You are just like colour changing lizard, You fill in man really negative wizard. In minds of many you do bring blizzard, Fish and birds enter food to gizzard.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 July 2018

You are just like colour changing lizard, You fill in man really negative wizard. In minds of many you do bring blizzard, Fish.... and birds enter food to gizzard. GREAT THOUGHTS REALLY

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 July 2018

You are just like colour changing lizard, You fill in man really negative wizard. In minds of many you do bring blizzard, Fish and birds enter food to gizzard. excellent thoughts Ma'am GREED AND JEALOUSY AND OF COURSE NARCISSISM ARE THE WORST of all human enemies But can't help it The world has to have many faces lovely thoughts really

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Michael Walker 04 July 2017

You are right: there is too much greed in the world, which leads to extremes of wealth and poverty side by side. I think extreme poverty is bad, and I wish greed would go away.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 May 2017

I am speechless, first my FIRST comment did not come through and I do hope this will, dear Bhargabi. You created an amazing poem, I had been once to India and my soul sister accompanied me everywhere by taxi. I wanted to walk, she forbade me but she did not explain. I aws in a world full of misy atmosphere, really. I am connectin what I had SEEN with these lines you so passionately created. My soul sister forbade me to walk.When I arrived home, I started following the news, newspapers and TV, I slowly on begin to understand THOROUGHLY. Excellently done!

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Kenneth Maswabi 26 January 2016

A beautiful poem well written. Greed is an enemy of all...let us rebuke this habit wherever & whenever we see it. Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 January 2016

Positive thinking is better than the creed of war! Thanks for sharing.

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Melvina Germain 20 September 2015

A great poem and a wonderful subject to write about. I hope many see this poem.....

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 February 2015

An amazing poem......................10

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Lyn Paul 26 January 2015

Along with your Poet Notes such a heartfelt write. YES... Go Away Greed Thank You

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Kim Barney 26 January 2015

Beautiful thoughts. Congratulations for having this poem selected as poem of the day!

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 January 2015

Congratulations. A well deserved poem for the member poem of the day. A hunger for greed will never fill empty stomach. It can play the worst ever role by spreading the greediness. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 January 2015

Congratulations. A well deserved poem for the member poem of the day. A hunger for greed will never fill empty stomach. It can play the worst ever role by spreading the greediness. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 January 2015

Congratulations. A well deserved poem for the member poem of the day. A hunger for greed will never fill empty stomach. It can play the worst ever role by spreading the greediness. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Fabrizio Frosini 26 January 2015

Thanks for sharing your passionate poem, Bhargabi. The theme is always present, but even more so after what we've learned a few days ago by Oxfam. Shameful is a system where the rich become every minute richer, and the poor, on the contrary, poorer.. This is exactly the picture Oxfam International has just shown us: “Richest 1% have seen their share of global wealth increase from 44% in 2009 to 48% in 2014 and (at this rate) will be more than 50% in 2016″. Not only, of the remaining 52% of global wealth, almost all (46%) is owned by the rest of the richest 20% of the world’s population. While the other 80% of humankind share just 5.5% of global wealth, and the gap between the richest and the rest is widening fast! I have written a poem on the same theme: ''WAX AND WANE'' - a poem about SIN AND GREED, in the globalized economy of our time.. Thanks for sharing!

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Akhtar Jawad 26 January 2015

A well deserved selection of poem of the day. Congrats.....................10

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Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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