Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, June 10, 2012

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No one noticed sun rise
No one took note of moon's surprise
Eclipsed remain for short time
We carried on our routine in time
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Re: Go away (Score: 1) by ossy on Sunday, June 10,2012 (10: 52: 24) Sounds more like a good Advice to us all...Do some good before you depart or go away Reply to This | Parent | Delete

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Re: Go away (Score: 1) by Ego_Rocks2x on Sunday, June 10,2012 (10: 54: 49) You are so wise. All of your poems are really good, and i really liked this one. It makes sense. I feel the meaning of your words and they touch me on such a different level that I can't describe it. I'm telling you this as a friend: Never stop writing.

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No one noticed sun rise No one took note of moon’s surprise

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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