Sunday, January 28, 2007

Go Away! Comments

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A gathering came together
To compose a message.
The contents of it were very clear.
When he received it...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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R R 28 January 2007

Great Poem Lawrence, So true. Take care! !

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jim hogg 28 January 2007

Some people like to meddle. We should be free to be as dysfunctional as we like within the law. Good poem! Now I'll go away.

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Joe Breunig 28 January 2007

An interesting piece; 'tis difficult to properly give and receive constructive criticsm; communication is nearly impossible between strangers. -Joe

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

Connecticut
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