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Maria, it`s a great creation... so natural, so easily flowing words which hold the point so tight... I`m against of holding fake relationships even if ur never given anything better. but what`s the point is if u can let go everything fake u`ll be given much and much more. i`d experienced it in my life, trust me. once more, ur poem is great, it has taken 99.9% of the pain and all the rest took our comments. God bless u

I opened my eyes and started to ask: who really this Man was? It was one who I idealized to in my mind, but in reality it was somebody fully else... Was the face, he shown me all the time, awesome, wonderful and fantastic.. this poem seems to me like a sweet romantic short story type poem about the ideal person who is always in dreams but has no face and you are a lucky one you at last found him, the man who was part of your past and now the man of future.. I read this poem few time and enjoy..its professionally expressed and meaningful is alot... a sweet poem from my best poetry friend maria shipka..well done 10/10 ++++++++++++++++++++++++

passion bewilders faster as when betrayed flower loses strength with of no fragrance heart seems to be hurt by the ruse in redness heart seems to be befuddled being bereft of love, yet passion riles on by the guile rocking up, ingenius write,10++, thanks for sharing

if you let him go...he does... he will run..run and run..towards to you