Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Gluttonous Heresy Comments

Rating: 5.0

These ideals I avoid
Perplex me most annoyed
So wrapped up in myself
Faith kneels down on a shelf
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John Weber
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Alexander Steen Stewart 26 November 2008

This is a very well crafted piece of art. I love the use of terametre and rhyming couplets making this poem flow very well. It would seem that you have a great grasp of technical skills for poetry. Good read keep writing :)

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