Monday, May 29, 2006

Glucose Comments

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Drip, drip, drip
With each life giving bubble
In the tube, the saline glucose solution
Holds the key to life for the one that lays so still
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Sidi Mahtrow
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Chitra - 16 August 2008

wonderful poem! 10+

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Goldy Locks 29 May 2006

oh wow, awesome Sidi. usually ive found when written in creative line form the writer doesn't pay enough attention to what he's saying. but not here! & quite appropriate for the day. loveSus

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