Thursday, July 5, 2007

Glow Comments

Rating: 3.0

The sun flows through wedge
Among trees on the hill top.
The giant glow- worm.
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Raveendran N.V.
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Tsira Goge 15 May 2008

It is a fine sincere picture, And the sun flows from yours a pray. ...10... Thanks for sharing, Raveendran... Kindest regards, Tsira

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Indira Babbellapati 10 July 2007

In your eyes for ever A dropp of solitude smiles! Wrinkles and grayness. simply loved these lines... i

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Melvina Germain 07 July 2007

A very descriptive write, I thououghly enjoyed it from start to finish.--Melvina--

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Sandra Fowler 05 July 2007

A very eloquent offering. But rather fatalistic as well. That decisive last line resonates. with the reader. Take care. As always, Sandra

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