Tuesday, May 27, 2014

Glossy Retreat Comments

Rating: 3.4

Wheat in water
Soaked for eight hours
Water drained
Grind to paste
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Vijay Sai R
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Lawan Tumsah 31 January 2016

A mixture of strange ingredients with delicious result. Lovely read.

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Momodou Jarju 23 July 2014

I love the poem Vijay Sai, short lines but very thoughtful and convey powerful message

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Chris Zachariou 22 June 2014

Good morning, I just read this poem which I found it really lovely. I liked the simplicity of the words to describe a simple task and yet the final product is a beautifully written poem. Regards Chris

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 June 2014

Beautiful recipe poem. Definitely after reading this poem, one will feel like having this sweet dish. Interesting. Loved reading it. Thank you for sharing with us....ha ha..

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Mohammed Albalushi 11 June 2014

its 1st time I rid poem 4 cooking recipe peom, interesting

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Mohammed Albalushi 11 June 2014

its 1st time I rid poem 4 cooking recipe peom, interesting

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Paige Brimer 10 June 2014

I like this poem... combines the art of words and the culinary arts... very creative!

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Mazhari David 09 June 2014

Cooked up to perfection. Robert said it all. I myself have indian blood in me and I adore indian food... feel thirsty now... a mango lassi should do it... shouldn't it?

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Robert Melliard 09 June 2014

As I adore Indian food this poem really made my mouth water! It reminded me of a film I once saw in which Mexican food was lovingly prepared by a girl for her boyfriend. The title in Spanish was Como Agua Para Chocolate and I recommend it. Congratulations on this poem. The word dollop shows that you have a great command of English vocabulary.

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Kassem Oude 09 June 2014

It's a receipt my dear poet!

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Teddy Opundo 09 June 2014

this got good taste for the mind.nice.

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Abhipsa Tripathy 09 June 2014

Wow! A very nice and tasty poem.

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Debra Robinson 08 June 2014

Illustrates pleasures and appreciation found in those things we do. I've never tried this product, but reading this makes my pallet want to go on the adventure! Well done....

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 08 June 2014

what a delicious poem.: Nice write.

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Bri Edwards 02 June 2014

yum! please pass the Tirunelveli halwa. thanks for sharing. :) bri

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Margaret Kiyaga 02 June 2014

Pleasantly and surprisingly simple. Thank you!

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Bernard Kennedy 31 May 2014

poem can be a metaphor of life experience

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Suman Kumar Das 31 May 2014

Very beautifully painted, Dear! ................my mouth is salivating................

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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