When courts and debates were all ruled by true justice
The people abused it and there came injustice.
When all laws were used to defend the innocent
The rich abused it and they made the truth absent.
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in the discepline of poetry your peom is standard and accepted to be a literary achievement. yes...we have to experience it ones again...particularly at this very crusial time of our history making. thank you for sharing this, this is a message for all of us -the reminder that each of us has something to share and to do for the good of all.
a very strong and thought provoking poem obed.. and to some extent evocative too for me.. evocative because it reminded me of the ancient india and india in the british era.. times change and so do nations... i like the way you urge your countrymen... in all it made my day and my mind is buzzing with thoughts.. 10++ certainly.. warm regards prashant shaurya
Meaningful, eloquent and beautiful lines. Thanks for sharing.
first thank u for ur personal invitation. i always glad to receive letters from ppl like u. in ur 15 u r sincerely polite person, that makes impossible to ignore ur quests. now abt the poem... i like it a lot, the thought, the wisdom that it holds. have u had a childhood i wonder, for having such brilliant brain must be hard to have fun. God bless ur way, ur friend Emma
I am honoured to be invited to read your poem. This poem has intensity and social concern both qualities that befit a good poet.10+
'Citizens, dare to lend your hands and make a stand. Glory must be seen again in this dying land'... a good sincere call to your compatriots...in fact a call worth sttention to all humans...good poem...10
wonderful poem, i like it but still there is justice where is humanity +10
I'm truly honored, that you thought of me, to read your poetry. This one, is truly a master piece, for someone of your age! Keep up, the good work.10+++++++
I'm honored that you thought of me, to read your poems. This one, is truly a master piece esapecially, because you're so young! There is nothing, that I could say to give you any advice, as you have proved, you're a great writer! I give you a 10+++++
A powerful poem that speaks loads about the truth of nations. So many Americans have felt this way about their own government and there is no doubt that people all over the world feel that same sentiment about their own nations.
A truthful poem written with a sincere observation of the sad condition of MAN'S world. Good write Obed for one of your age. you hit the nail on the head of many social ills that confronts you and many before you.Keep observing until you come to the understanding that if you cannot change the world... make your own world as painless and peaceful as you can. Read my 11 years old grand daughter's poem 'Rain, Tide, Run by Ilana Sabio on poem hunter. A10+++ this poem deserves
Sweet rain drops turns salty once it merges in ocean. nice write.
a praiseworthy write on the lost glory of the land...profound thoughts
Hey, do you know how reflexive this poem is? This poem is a mirror of the living nowadays... Very thought provoking, you know? It's right, glory must be seen, again, we shouldn't be seeing those thing making people suffer. You wrote this very nice...